Crit Feedback

I received from useful feedback from the crit, the main points that I have highlighted from this are:

• Showing the evidence of where I have come from to where I am at, at this point in time.
• More research into the typefaces, visuals and how they can be used in motion.
• To be more specific on who my target audience is.

I have come up with an action plan so that I can get the most out of my time by the end of the week. This will hopefully allow me to progress onto developing my ideas and have a clear objective in a weeks time.

I have also decided that I am going to revert to top 10 characters from The Wire as it gives me a wider range of aspects to use.